la .lojban.

ni’o ko’a goi la’oi .WEDANCEALONETHISWAY. pixra le nu ga je la’oi .VUNC. cu xadni pinvre ko’a goi le co’e ja rokci je me’oi .couch. je cu caicta le co’e ja kacma gi le lanci be le ka ce’u nonlingeni cu dandu le gapru je pagbu be ko’a je cu jai rinka le nu narcu’i fa lo nu viska le pagbu be le torso be la’oi .VUNC.

.i ranji fa le ku’irni masti .i la’e di’u joi zo’e cu krinu le nu ranji fa le nu la .varik. cu xraci’a lo ku’irni co’e

.i la .varik. na birti tu’a le flira .i la .varik. cu jinvi le du’u ko’a pixra le nu le flira be la’oi .VUNC. cu dukse le ka ce’u barda .i le kanla be la’oi .VUNC. cu traji le ka la .varik. cu jinvi le du’u pixra le nu ce’u dukse le ka ce’u xi re barda .i ku’i cumki fa lo nu la .varik. cu binxo

.i la .varik. cu cpedu lo nu cusku lo se du’u ma kau cfila le pixra kei kei ni’i zo’e joi le su’u vo’a djica lo nu xagzengau

.i la .varik. cu pilno la’oi .Krita. le nu xraci’a ko’a

.i la .varik. na birti lo du’u ma kau mentu le pu’u vo’a xraci’a ko’a

.i la’oi .Unlicense. plijaspu ko’a .i la .varik. cu djica curmi lo nu pilno ko’a lo na’e xebni co’e

English

“WEDANCEALONETHISWAY” depicts that (VUNC reclines on a stone-or-whatever couch and stares at the camera or whatever, and the agender flag is draped on the top part of the couch and prevents seeing a part of the torso of VUNC).

That (Pride Month continues) justifies that (that (VARIK draws queer stuff) continues).

VARIK is not certain about the face. VARIK opines that “WEDANCEALONETHISWAY” depicts that the face of VUNC is excessively large. VARIK particularly opines that “WEDANCEALONETHISWAY” depicts that the eyes of VUNC are excessively large. But that (VARIK changes) is possible.

VARIK requests describing the flaws of “WEDANCEALONETHISWAY”; VARIK desires improvement.

VARIK uses (for drawing) Krita.

VARIK is not certain about the duration of the process of drawing.

The Unlicense is the licence of “WEDANCEALONETHISWAY”. VARIK welcomes using (for non-hateful stuff) “WEDANCEALONETHISWAY”.

  • LordAmplifier@pawb.social
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    21 days ago

    I find it a bit hard to judge whether the head is too large without seeing the torso, but maybe it’s the non-human head on a very human body that makes it look a bit “unusual.” Anthros always have to find a balance between animal features and human features, and if you’re closer to the animal side, like an anatomically correct feline head, it might look a bit odd at times. That being said, compared to the legs and the arms, I don’t think the head is too large, and the eyes fit the size of the mouth and nose, too.

    If anything, I think the torso is a little too short, and that makes VUNC’s head appear bigger. I tried to stretch the flag a bit, and that makes VUNC’s proportions a bit more “human,” as in, what we’re used to in anthros. How does that look to you? :3

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    It’s still a very good drawing, and I like that the agender flag is covering the parts that are usually associated with gender. Happy pride month <3

    • la .varik. .VALefor.@pawb.socialOP
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      17 days ago

      If anything, I think the torso is a little too short, and that makes VUNC’s head appear bigger.

      .i la .varik. cu kirsku fi le ka ce’u stidi kei jenai cu toltu’i

      VARIK thanks for suggesting and does not disagree.

      How does that look to you?

      .i la .varik. cu cusku dei ca le nu vo’a na mutce le ka ce’u tolnei… kei kei je ku’i le nu vo’a na birti .i la .varik. cu kirsku fi le ka ce’u bixygau pe’a

      That (VARIK writes the current sentence) is contemporaneous with that (VARIK does not very dislike the thing)… and that VARIK is uncertain. VARIK thanks for “modifying”.